This Is Just To Say
By William Carlos Williams and Breanna
I have thrown steak and tomato sauce at my sister
The steak was unwanted
on my plate
(And which you were probably quite proud of)
Forgive me, I didn’t want it
So I covered it with sauce
And threw it at my sister
who was being a brat
Hi Breanna sapphire here this is an awsome piece of work and funny. I hope you dont do that again. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteHi Sapphire! Thanks for the comment I really appreciate it. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Breanna. I hope lockdown is going well for you. I liked your poem. It is in the same style as a poem I wrote. It is a bit wasteful to throw a perfectly good steak at someone. Please comment on my poem in the style of William Carlos William.
ReplyDeleteGirls. I want you to look at your Punctuation. Especially "Sapphire". Breanna needs to put a comma between comment and I. Emma your punctuation looks just fine.
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'll work on it. Thank you
DeleteGood. I should hope so. Also make that Sapphire,if I may call her that, work on her punctuation as well as I was disgusted.
DeleteBY THE WAY, YOU DIDN'T NEED TO BE SO RUDE. I AM ONLY 11!!!
Deletethe only time you said something nice was to Emma and just called Sapphire and I out on it! I wouldn't have minded if you had of said it in a nicer way!
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