The Door Poem

WALT write a poem using our imagination about what the may look like

WALT write describing our different senses 

WALT use poetic techniques in our poems 

 

I'm A River Poem

For conservation week we had to create a poem from the perspective of an animal or something that could be effected by the way people treat the earth and the things on it I chose a river. 

this is my poem!

This Is Just To Say

This Is Just To Say

By William Carlos Williams and Breanna

I have thrown steak and tomato sauce at my sister

The steak was unwanted

on my plate

(And which you were probably quite proud of)

Forgive me, I didn’t want it

So I covered it with sauce

And threw it at my sister 

who was being a brat

Packing My Bag For... Poem

Walt: develop our own poem in response to a model (packing my bag for… by James Norcliffe)

Walt: use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing

Walt: have some fun and be creative and be creative with ideas and imagination 

Packing my bag for the journey to Doom-lay-magic

Hi i'm Ayah and i'm Breanna were  going on a journey we read in a book that if you found hole in the ground you were supposed to jump in it. The land is called Doom-lay-magic half the land is hell and the other half is magical, here is what we packed before we fell down a hole.

For protection

A shiny,

metallic, 

stainless steel sword

With gems embroidered 

into the handle 

In case of an encounter with the devil

A bright light 

 spotlight 

For in the dark

 black and navy blue

So it doesn't attract anything 

 So we can see if something is lurking

A black and red,

Thick fabric

decorated with intricate patterns

tight, itchy 

fireproof and waterproof 

piece of clothing

In case we get wet, or an incident in hell

A colourful,

Lollipop Umbrella 

you can eat it but 

it will grow back just like THAT.

In case it rains candy or hot red ashes are flying around in Doom-lay-magic

I’ll take a friend in case I get lonely ‘or I 

need a human sacrifice.’

By Breanna and Ayah!! 

  

If I Had Wings

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This week's task was a poem if I had wings. First we had to answer some questions and then colour in the piece of paper with the poem. We had to use sticky (Interesting) language, the five senses and interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.

Get NZ Writing - poetry

Over the past few weeks we have been part of the 'Get NZ Writing' poetry project. This project aimed to get 96,000 poem written across NZ!! We were sent a tin with objects in it and we used one of these objects to write poems. Here is my poem.