Packing My Bag For... Poem

Walt: develop our own poem in response to a model (packing my bag for… by James Norcliffe)

Walt: use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing

Walt: have some fun and be creative and be creative with ideas and imagination 

Packing my bag for the journey to Doom-lay-magic

Hi i'm Ayah and i'm Breanna were  going on a journey we read in a book that if you found hole in the ground you were supposed to jump in it. The land is called Doom-lay-magic half the land is hell and the other half is magical, here is what we packed before we fell down a hole.

For protection

A shiny,

metallic, 

stainless steel sword

With gems embroidered 

into the handle 

In case of an encounter with the devil

A bright light 

 spotlight 

For in the dark

 black and navy blue

So it doesn't attract anything 

 So we can see if something is lurking

A black and red,

Thick fabric

decorated with intricate patterns

tight, itchy 

fireproof and waterproof 

piece of clothing

In case we get wet, or an incident in hell

A colourful,

Lollipop Umbrella 

you can eat it but 

it will grow back just like THAT.

In case it rains candy or hot red ashes are flying around in Doom-lay-magic

I’ll take a friend in case I get lonely ‘or I 

need a human sacrifice.’

By Breanna and Ayah!!