Monday 25 March 2019

Get NZ Writing - poetry

Over the past few weeks we have been part of the 'Get NZ Writing' poetry project. This project aimed to get 96,000 poem written across NZ!! We were sent a tin with objects in it and we used one of these objects to write poems. Here is my poem. 

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  1. Unknown31 March 2019 at 16:38

    Hi Breanna

    I love you Get NZ Writing Poem about the pink teddy bear. You met the success criteria of using 'sticky' words to describe your item from the tin. I like the line, 'delicate sunburnt bald and worried.' It brings up images in my mind of teddy bears which often look cute but also have something delicate about them and at times a worried look. Ka pai tō tuhituhi.

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  2. Anonymous3 July 2019 at 12:18

    HI that's cool poem

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  3. Anonymous3 July 2019 at 12:23

    Kia ora Breanna I like your poem and I think it is pretty good.I like the colours in the background maybe if you did a couple more sentences it would be good.

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