Tēnā korua Breanna and Emma. You have both done an excellent job here with your writing to explain the pōwhiri process. I can see you both now have a good understanding of the pōwhiri and you will be able to participate in this process at the marae with understanding and respect.
I liked that your writing was organised into clear paragraphs and that you had a clear introduction. As a reader it meant I knew what the writing was going to be about. Your next step is to use some more complex punctuation.
Tēnā korua Breanna and Emma. You have both done an excellent job here with your writing to explain the pōwhiri process. I can see you both now have a good understanding of the pōwhiri and you will be able to participate in this process at the marae with understanding and respect.
ReplyDeleteI liked that your writing was organised into clear paragraphs and that you had a clear introduction. As a reader it meant I knew what the writing was going to be about. Your next step is to use some more complex punctuation.