Breanna, what a wonderful Easter you had! Learning to ski is tricky and it can be very painful on your arms. You have used wonderful vocabulary (launched, pro-skier, compliments, temperature) and have described your feelings and responses to your adventure. Great writing. Something for next time: remember that names, including Mum and Dad, have capital letters, so does Easter.
Thanks Mrs Truman for your comment, it was our last time going camping until summer so we wanted to make the most of it. Next time I'll try to remember the capital letters. Water skiing isn't actually to hard its mainly balance and strength.
Breanna, what a wonderful Easter you had! Learning to ski is tricky and it can be very painful on your arms. You have used wonderful vocabulary (launched, pro-skier, compliments, temperature) and have described your feelings and responses to your adventure. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteSomething for next time: remember that names, including Mum and Dad, have capital letters, so does Easter.
Thanks Mrs Truman for your comment, it was our last time going camping until summer so we wanted to make the most of it. Next time I'll try to remember the capital letters. Water skiing isn't actually to hard its mainly balance and strength.
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