Friday 17 August 2018

Beach clean up

walt use descriptive words in our writing and make the reader feel a certin way

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora, my name is Fatima.p and I'm from Room 18 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about the beach clean up. I remember when I did something like this at my old school.Have you tried ending with a sentence ex(And that's the end of our beach clean up)?
    Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog
    http://odsfatimap.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later,
    Fatima.p

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  2. Hi Breanna, my name is Emma and I go to Karoro school. I really like the language you used 😁. It made me think of when I went on that trip with you. Did you notice how you spelt toilety wrong.

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