Walt: develop our own poem in response to a model (packing my bag for… by James Norcliffe)
Walt: use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing
Walt: have some fun and be creative and be creative with ideas and imagination
Packing my bag for the journey to Doom-lay-magic
Hi i'm Ayah and i'm Breanna were going on a journey we read in a book that if you found hole in the ground you were supposed to jump in it. The land is called Doom-lay-magic half the land is hell and the other half is magical, here is what we packed before we fell down a hole.
For protection
A shiny,
metallic,
stainless steel sword
With gems embroidered
into the handle
In case of an encounter with the devil
A bright light
spotlight
For in the dark
black and navy blue
So it doesn't attract anything
So we can see if something is lurking
A black and red,
Thick fabric
decorated with intricate patterns
tight, itchy
fireproof and waterproof
piece of clothing
In case we get wet, or an incident in hell
A colourful,
Lollipop Umbrella
you can eat it but
it will grow back just like THAT.
In case it rains candy or hot red ashes are flying around in Doom-lay-magic
I’ll take a friend in case I get lonely ‘or I
need a human sacrifice.’
By Breanna and Ayah!!